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[wjhk93]

Oh, darn no mercy for Marci. Marci agonizing slow torture to death is better than a quick painless overrated death. Terrific wheel of slow ripping cooking torture to death. What's there not to like? Will Burner

[wulf]

Here's the next three images. I decided to add some text to the imagery. I'd appreciate opinions about whether it's a positive or a negative. And is it readable?

Ok, this is seriously maxing out my erect-o-meter.

Beautifully sadistic work Sir. I love the terrified eyes in #2, and everything about #3. Reminds me of the old Zell scene, but much, much better.

I do like the dialog because it adds to the drama and her terror. You did a good job with the color of the text. It's not as distracting even though it's not quite as easy to read. But I had no problem reading it, so the text is ok imo.

Thank for sharing, btw.

[frog]

Here's the next three images. I decided to add some text to the imagery. I'd appreciate opinions about whether it's a positive or a negative. And is it readable?

Sehr gut. My humble opinion re the text. The red font color makes it hard to read. This might not draw attention to the text, particularly when the images are so riveting. It's a delicate balance between text and illustration.

[hornythumb]

Here's the next three images. I decided to add some text to the imagery. I'd appreciate opinions about whether it's a positive or a negative. And is it readable?

Images are excellent , and very hot . I could read the text but the images speak for themselves.

[mrblack]

I like the text as it adds to the overall image and story. The color and size are also subtle enough to be ignored by those who don't care for it. Best of both worlds imho.

[bleumune]

Oh, darn no mercy for Marci. Marci agonizing slow torture to death is better than a quick painless overrated death. Terrific wheel of slow ripping cooking torture to death. What's there not to like? Will Burner

Nope, no mercy at all for Marci!

The turning wheel over the fire has been a favorite of mine since I first saw it on one of the old Men's magazines!

[bleumune]

Thanks everyone for their opinions on the text. Most of them are positive, and I agree that making the color red wasn't the best choice for clarity. Maybe I'll try white next time. Any thoughts?

[bleumune]

I meant to post these 3 yesterday, but the cats caused a home disaster when they somehow pushed a couple of storage boxes full of photos off an upper shelf. What a mess!

I decided to change the text from red to white. Let me know if it makes the imagery better. I was afraid the bold text would distract from the images.

[wulf]

I meant to post these 3 yesterday, but the cats caused a home disaster when they somehow pushed a couple of storage boxes full of photos off an upper shelf. What a mess!

I decided to change the text from red to white. Let me know if it makes the imagery better. I was afraid the bold text would distract from the images.

What a turn on... wickedly cruel and evil. Just the way we like it.
Beautiful work and thanks for sharing.

I think the text in these works just fine. Easier to read, but not distracting. Well done.

[wjhk93]

Merci, I predict your bra and panties will soon ignite and disappear at the next rotation.
Exposing your DD cup breasts and your vagina so the flames and heat can violently caress your hard swollen nipples and your wet clitoris sending you into the mother of all orgasm. Then the spikes will rip you apart. Will Burner