LLL glad to hear you can use it. The story line seems interesting and good for some twists and turns. I can imagine Sadean misfortunes for an innocent girl.
While we are at it, her is my version of the second one. I could not resist presenting her as Cirsei Lannister in the clutches of the High Sparrow. If there is anyone I would have liked to have in a torture dungeon it was her.
"Continue with the torment until she confesses! It is obvious that her walk of shame was a travesty. Have her reveal where her incestuous brother and the dwarf are hiding. Have her tell us the names of the other plotters in the conspiracy to kill us! After she confesses do with her what you will!